Friday, August 23, 2013

FFF: Abandoned

I glanced up from my newspaper when I heard someone come in the front door. The excited voice told me it was my teenage son.

"Look what I found, Dad! Can I keep her?"

Well, this is a surprise. But I noted with some pride what a strapping young man he's becoming...carrying the girl over his shoulder with no apparent effort.

"I don't know, son. Where did you find her? She's obviously somebody's sub, and they'll be looking for her. Look at her collar...the intricate knots."

"I found her outside of Fong's. I'm pretty sure she's been abandoned. I promise I'll take care of her - she can stay in my room. I'll feed her and clean up after her, I'll teach her discipline, and I'll fuck her every day."

I smiled and tried to suppress an eye roll. What parent hasn't heard these promises? I knew damned well that once the initial excitement wore off that he'd get wrapped up in other things, and I'd be the one taking care of her after work when all I wanted to do was have a beer and watch the game. Yes, I could see it clearly - I'd be the one thrusting my cock down her throat until she gagged, I'd be the one paddling her ass until it turned bright red, I'd be the one tying her spread-eagle to the bed and using her without mercy.

But I looked at her, and I knew I couldn't say no. The poor thing was obviously cold, exhausted, all alone. And it would teach him some responsibility. Plus, my dad had let me keep a sub when I was a teen.

"Okay, son, you can keep her. But this is a big responsibility."

"Thank you, Dad. You're the best. I won't let you down!"

(300 words)

The challenge this week was:

Word Length = 250 (check, including bonus)
Required word = "before" or "after" (check)
Forbidden words = abandoned, empty, mp3 player, rope (oops!)
Bonus words = You can go up to 300 total if you tell us both how she got there and what happened after she was found. (I kinda explained it, so I'm claiming the bonus. Just try to take it away from me!)

Go see Advizor to see who else is participating.


  1. Wow..thought pic was kinda creepy..but i kinda enjoyed your spin on this..nice

  2. Oh good lord that had my laughing. I love the satire. Very well played.

  3. "Plus, my dad had let me keep a sub when I was a teen." I WANT TO MEET YOUR FAMILY.....

    I read this while I was out for my morning run (that turned in to a walk) and i laughed out loud as the story unfolded. My daughters bugged me about a puppy for months until I had them care for our neighbor's pet while they were on vacation. Maybe the son will realize that taking care of a sub is tough, but the rewards are great. And maybe the dad can pley with her once in a while too, you know, just to give the kid a breatk.

  4. And yes, while you earned the bonus, "Abandoned" was a forbidden word and there it is, right in the title. Tsk Tsk Tsk. :-)

    1. Right, it's in both the title and the story. Oops! It was already there when I noticed my faux pas - and I liked the story too much to change it. I guess I have to look forward to some time in FFF purgatory in the afterlife....

  5. LMAO: loved this take. A sort of utopian. dystopian (depends on what angle) satirical parody!


  6. My my my... you are so twisted! I adore it! Great take on a tough photo! So fun FFFing with you Max!

  7. And I thought my family was messed up! Loved it.