Friday, April 15, 2011

FFF: Virgin

In the gathering dark on the night of my eighteenth birthday, my older brother guided me into the unmarked building. He exchanged a few words with a heavily-made-up woman at the front desk, and I was led down a dark hallway. I had a pretty good idea what was about to happen, and I was all nervous anticipation.

I entered the room, and there she was. Blonde, beautiful, laying on a bed and draped in a white sheet. Even in my mixture of excitement and fear, I knew the look on her face wasn't lust or anticipation. It was resignation, maybe even a touch of scorn.

But she controlled herself and took charge. She shrugged the sheet off, and I drank in the sight of her gloriously naked body. The look on my face must have been priceless, because she broke into a smile.

"First time, hun?"

I nodded mutely.

"Don't worry, I'll show you what you need to know."

The challenge this week was: 60-160 words.
The phrase "...the gathering dark..." must be used.
Go see Panser's Lair to see who else is participating!


  1. Yes, resignation and scorn, as if being put upon. That look on her face offers so many possibilities. Nice take on the picture.

  2. I like!

    What kind of girl wouldn't smile if she'd get that sort of reaction from a guy when undressing?! :)

  3. Well now I just feel sorry for everyone. No one should have to lose it that way. Ah well. A very nicely done piece.

  4. yes... that's what I saw in her face!

  5. It would be kinda fun to be a prostitute if you could specialize in "first times."

  6. seems like a popular theme, this de-virginizing :P nicely done and happy FFF!

  7. Yea, I took the first time theme and turned him over to the undead. Your post is much happier. Excellent work this week.

    And Pocket? Can I be yoru first first?

  8. Love the first time ever encounter, always the most passionate. Great piece.

  9. A very nice "first time" post. :)

  10. Nice short post... Hope she can look past her scorn and see the whole experience from "his virginal" eyes ~